Tick…Tick…Tick...Tick it’s just gone to 10pm and my friend Miah had turned up yet. Have they forgotten about me? Maybe there’s just traffic. A few seconds felt like hours and as well as being annoyed. I was bored so, I played on the broken down computer and started to play with the new cushion that dad had just got for the computer. Suddenly I heard a really loud BANG! BANG!! It made my ears pop. Was I imagining things or was it real? BANG! BANG! The noise went again!
Wow I though to myself. First my friends don’t turn up and now I’m going crazy! Smoke started to come out of the computer desktop. My asthma has only just got better. I heard it again it sounded like a tube going through a long tunnel. Moments later I decided to check out what was wrong with the computer, which my sister had apparently broken when I went swimming, practise, but I managed it anyway. I heard it again at that point I really thought I had to see a doctor. It’s probably because I need some company.
While I was checking out my website I was 100% sure that my asthma had come back. I felt suspicious that it was something to do with this computer. Suddenly gas came out of the screen there was I big error on the screen but when the computer screen lit up something strange happened! I was in tweenie land!
It could smell Bella making pancakes. I could see fizz and Milo playing football. I closed my eyes and opened it to check if I was in tweenie land and it was. I was. I really was in tweenie land. At last I went into the garden it was immense, it was covered with multi-coloured flowers, and next to it there was a gargantuan swing! Milo and fizz insisted I went on it. Even though I wasn’t that sort of person that went on swings, I did it anyway. For the first time in my life I thought a swing was actually scary.
During that day Bella made us the most luxurious pancakes in the whole of history. Later I remembered that my mum always said never talk to strangers but every child watched them when they were young so they don’t count as strangers
I began to get worried that someone would come looking for me so I decided to come back home, but there was a problem. I had no way to get out! I began to get butterflies in my tummy because I’m stranded in tweenie land! I always won’t to see what inside my screensaver would be like but now .I’m starting to regret it.
Minutes later I spoke to Bella and realised she was a really nice person with a great personality and we both got ideas on how to leave tweenie land and I promised Bella that she could come and visit me when we figure out how to get out of this place.
It took hours and hours to find a way to get out, and at last we thought of a way. Bella said if you use the tweenie rocket it would take you back into time. So that’s what I did and there I was in dinosaur land! Bella had winded the rocket to far back but luckily I knew how to get out. I quickly had to wind the rocket because in a distance there was a gigantic dinosaur.
So there I was back home, before anything happened again I took 9 steps away from the computer, before I end up in Charlie and Lola or telly tubbies land. My advice is never use a broken computer!
